Front Cover
The feedback I received from others from the same age range was mostly positive and they thought that the use of space was good.
Contents Page
Feedback on the contents page was positive and people liked the way it was spaced out. One person commented on the fact that it was very clear and though there is no information on it yet they could tell that it would be easy to read.
Double Page Spread
My feedback group admitted that it was hard to picture the page at the moment but could see where I was going with the layout. They said that I may have to have more text on the page and the picture should be a little bigger so that the model is covering at least 1/3 of the page. They also mentioned the possibility of having a strip of pictures across the top of bottom of the page so that the page makes readers want to read the text as well as appreciating the main picture.
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